Sunday, February 7, 2010

Twilight Comments

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I wish u tell me who r u?
Or comfort me & say that u r not fye
I wish u take me high 2 the sky
Or just look at me & say I love u
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zeinab sherif
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Omar Ibrahim 15 February 2010

i didn't see the movie...this poem is from the best of your new poems...beautiful metaphors are written here but you have to maintain a metaphor all over the poem.thanks for inviting me to read your new poem which i think are much better than the old poems....keep writing please. thanks for sharing.

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