Wednesday, October 31, 2007

Twilight Comments

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Have you ever seen that beautiful dame?
Oh! You must be pondering what's her name
She's called Twilight, from East she came
And everyday she comes from the country same
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Anjali Mandokhot
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Shashank Sharma 23 September 2008

Hi dear, its a lovely poem, enjoyed it thoroughly..every bit.. liked the way you looked at everything.. Keep writing.. Wishes - Shashank

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Al Ramos 22 September 2008

Beautiful poem, great use of rhyme, masterfully done. Write more sweet Anjali.

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K. V. Venkataramana 03 March 2008

Your poem is full of images and beautifully expressed. Congrats! Venkataramana

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Prasanna Kumari 02 February 2008

twilight appears with added beauty with the choice and arrangements of your words.....lovely...

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Putholi Arumugham 01 November 2007

Oh Anjali...what an amazing poem it is so beautifully thought and crafted wish i can steal some of those fantasies from you keep writing more such

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Kee Thampi 01 November 2007

A real sweetness of a dacron to wear with.... poetry excels with a beauty, beyond words The warm rays that wake you up and caress your face Are her golden locks tied in loveknot of golden lace The fragrance running in you, with your breath's pace Is actually the breath of that divine grace.

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