Have you ever seen that beautiful dame?
Oh! You must be pondering what's her name
She's called Twilight, from East she came
And everyday she comes from the country same
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Beautiful poem, great use of rhyme, masterfully done. Write more sweet Anjali.
Your poem is full of images and beautifully expressed. Congrats! Venkataramana
twilight appears with added beauty with the choice and arrangements of your words.....lovely...
Oh Anjali...what an amazing poem it is so beautifully thought and crafted wish i can steal some of those fantasies from you keep writing more such
A real sweetness of a dacron to wear with.... poetry excels with a beauty, beyond words The warm rays that wake you up and caress your face Are her golden locks tied in loveknot of golden lace The fragrance running in you, with your breath's pace Is actually the breath of that divine grace.
Hi dear, its a lovely poem, enjoyed it thoroughly..every bit.. liked the way you looked at everything.. Keep writing.. Wishes - Shashank