Twilight Comments

In this poem, you are describing how to steer away from your night mares. I have nightmares all the time. I guess because I love reading Goosebumps at 12 or 1 during dark but full moon nights. Having a nightmare to me is like watching a Goosebump film. But sometimes, when the nightmare is notabout Goosebumps, I do get scared. Once, I even bit off all the nails on my left hand. I loved this poem a lot. Great job. Deserved a ten.

Sometimes dreams can turn into nightmares and you have described how it is sometimes when you can't control them! ! But if you learn how to 'steer' them and remind yourself that it's just a dream, you can dream whatever you want to dream... very interesting, in this poem you talked to your nightmare to stay away, great job! Love you! Ma