Twilight is a time for her to turn around and walk home,
To a place where she never felt alone
To see the glory and fall of her emotions cascading down the mountainside,
As her home was found in a place where people had smiles so wide,
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You tell an intriguing story here, Hazel. You placed your reader quickly inside your poem's character and we saw the environment and we felt the character's thoughts and emotions as if they were our own. It's a wonder I didn't feel the touch of chill as the twilight air touched her cheeks. Very good poetic storytelling skills here
Loved the visuals as your read along each line a very powerful read, and very much enjoyed. Annette.
To a place where she never felt alone! Thanks for sharing.
Today she rises to face the sun that dissolves those demons of the night, Her mind has been set free with the beauty of the twilight. Here we see a forlorn soul emerging from the shadows of darkness and brightening with the crimson hue of twilight........ A beautiful poem that ends in a positive note!
Just forever deep within her is the shadows of Slievenamon in the twilight, She has struggled to fight the darkness, Today she rises to face the sun that dissolves those demons of the night, Her mind has been set free with the beauty of the twilight. A nice painting, a beautifully penned poem.
Loved the poem as ma'am Mihaela says for its ' Beautiful and haunting imagery.' At lease at the twilight of her life she has an awakening which dissolves all the darkness of her life.
Beautiful and haunting imagery in a dreamy-like atmosphere, with contrasts of light and darkness streaming perfectly through the poem; analogous to the emotional turmoil; and the twilight's triumph at the end.
This is a beautiful resplendent write dissolving twilight in her emotions. Loved each stanza. Thanks for sharing. Regards.