Friday, August 17, 2012
Twilight Comments
Rating: ★4.3
T ruth
W ipes out
I nfertile
L and of fantasy
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Neela Nath Das
17 August 2012
The first verse is acrostics. Very nice.Impressive usage of nice imagery.
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7/25/2025 12:04:32 AM # 1.0.0
Hallo Deep, I enjoyed this, but I would post the two poems extra, I`m not too sure that the mix is a good idea, they deserve to be looked at apart. I`m not too sure if the Tanka keeps to the syllable count of a standard Tanka, but I am a pragmatist who says, if it works it`s fine, and I like both of these poems. You might be interested to look at my writing. Regards, Leslie