Friday, August 14, 2020

Twice Comments

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Twice
by Michael R. Burch

Now twice she has left me
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Rob Lamberton 29 November 2022

I've thoughts of gathering embers but someone else is putting wood on her fire!

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Alex Sarich 09 September 2020

Nicely written. Once one would learn but twice, that's what love can do to one.

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Anais Vionet 14 August 2020

" when love lay upon us" , " sputters, refusing to burn" - lovely phrases that convey real feeling - very nice work

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Bernard F. Asuncion 14 August 2020

A well executed poem. Excellently conveyed....10+++

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