Twenty years from this day
When we've gone separate ways
When all is grown, all has changed
And time causes feelings to fade
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...twenty years from now I'll be posthumous Lin, but I'll leave you my pen
Amazing write, Linley... heartfelt but not overly sentimental. Really well done! ! Brian
This is so bitter-sweet Linley, great write though and like the feeling of hope and knowledge that love WAS there.... it probably still is! HG: -) xx
There's great sadness in this, but there also seems to be a resigned determination that it will end up this way, plus a generosity of spirit. There will be cause for that. Good quality writing throughout.
Fabulous, Linley. wonderfully wistful, but with recognition that it's 'better to have loved and lost...) Jxxx
A sad read in some ways, Linley. Anticipating a parting of the ways in 20 years' time? How can you be sure? Love, Fran xx
It's a fascinating thought - twenty years from now... scarey too! Your compassion and tolerance shine through this piece about forgiveness. Thanks for sharing. love, Allie xxxx