Twenty Million Evil People Poem by Shaun Cronick

Twenty Million Evil People

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They came from all walks of life.
Men, women even the young.
All evil.
Twenty Million.
Twenty Million crammed together over three islands.
Lle Ste Joseph, Lle Royale and Lle Diable.
All found off French Guiana.
All know by a better name...
The Devil's Islands.
All were summoned by their master Satan
Or so they thought.
All promised untold power and riches.
Or so they thought.
All waiting for that promised time He would appear.
Twenty million waiting.
Twenty million counting down.
And at 6 minutes past 6 on June 6.
They were enveloped in a white light.
That was when the first nuke detonated.
A nanosecond later the other two hydrogen bombs exploded.
They would later by the world be called.
The Father, The Son and The Holy Spirit.
Twenty million evaporated in an instant.
There was no trace of radiation.
There was no tidal surge.
And open sea is now where they stood.
The world at first was horrified and puzzled.
Then the truth about these people came out.
The next day the world rejoiced at the news,
Of a new star shining over Bethlehem.

Copyright Shaun Cronick 2019. All Rights Reserved.

Saturday, August 31, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: miracle
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bryony Sheldon 11 October 2019

An explosive poem, and I loved the ending. This was a great experience to read! " The devil and the darkness Let her evil wander free. And here on Devil's Island, The final stop for me."

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Shaun Cronick 12 October 2019

Thank you Bryony for your kind and generous comment. And thanks for that superbly written stanza.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 01 September 2019

A gripping dramatic monologue, Shaun. Another powerful and excellent write. Liked the title, very powerful. Well crafted and executed religious write.

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Shaun Cronick 04 September 2019

Thank you for another kind and gracious comment Rose Marie. They uplift me every time. I'm pleased a good person as yourself enjoyed reading it. And I thank you again.

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