Wednesday, September 12, 2012

Twelve O'Clock Boat Comments

Rating: 3.0

Only the creaking murmur of the wheel,
The trembling of the engines as they turn;
The ferry glides upon an even keel,
And Pinchgut squats in shadow hard astern. . . .
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John Alexander Ross McKellar
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Michael Morgan 12 September 2012

excellent ideas, clearly expressed. Well organized. Fearless rhyming. A ten.

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