Sunday, November 29, 2020

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Its three a.m
Awake i am
Lying down no aim
There's light rain
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Deluke Muwanigwa
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Mahtab Bangalee 29 November 2020

insomnia lives in an unstable mind let the thirsty heart drink the nectar according to its wish

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Dipak Adhya 29 November 2020

Often an odd time gives opportunities for introspection...

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Varsha M 29 November 2020

There's light rain...rain makes weather cool And a power cut Ceiling fan is out It's become hot.... beautiful paradoxical use giving glow to your poetry. Another paradox use.. World time is three a.m.....probably inwest where winter is in the form of snow...or probably cold Restless i am.....so restlessness compared to hotness..good It's very hot I am slowly stewing in a pot...great emphasis on this I go to the kitchen I wonder where's my kitty and kitten....keep searching.

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