O beloved! Hear out me
What I say solemnly, See
At my face please, away
Not from my sight, sweet, anyway.
                
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a unique idea and perfect imagination and execution is really good...nice poem..rajat...two pointers of the clock are lover and beloved....you remind Donne.....go forward.

 
                     
                
A well written poem Rajat.. I agree with Nurul, the pointers do remind us of John Donne.. Thanks for sharing.