Wednesday, February 20, 2008

Twelve Days Comments

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awaiting that yellow bird
i settle like marine snow
ardorous, flat-on-my-face
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Katelyn Hinman
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Frank Bana 03 March 2008

you write like this, you convince.. you are the one who will.... if you want feedback on this poem, just hear this voice repeating, 'outstanding'! Greyscale unsettles me more deeply, though.... this unsettles beautifully.

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