Twas Last Night Poem by me poet yeps poet

Twas Last Night

Rating: 5.0


HIGH FOLS MY POEMS ARE VANISHING PH WHY

Thursday, May 16, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: dream,poem,poetic expression
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Varsha M 21 May 2020

Image on mirror blur As steam fill in the air. Wiping the vapour opaque I saw the image great Gathering the experience Nothing is fake Until I make it true With my holy presence. Beautiful words to describe the fear of loneliness, but no one to hear the pain. Well penned poem. Admirations and appreciations. Good work.

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Aniruddha Pathak 18 May 2019

Good it was a midnight dream, imagine what if it were an early dawn's one and true!

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Rajnish Manga 17 May 2019

You have re-created the dream scene very deftly so as to transmit it with stark eeriness. Thanks a lot, Dear Friend.

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And grateful for your kindness RM JI

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 16 May 2019

then the window opened I shouted with my entire mite but silence broke through as there was no delight my dream was buried in the middle of the eerie nite Yes midnight

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