Tuesday, November 1, 2005

Twarted Tiger. Comments

Rating: 4.8

Tiger hunting in dark of night,
Keenful eyes keeping it's prey in sight,
hidden in the long grass, crouching low,
waiting to deliver it's fatal blow.
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Kim Barney 25 May 2015

Enjoyed the poem very much. It would be even better if you fixed three little mistakes: 1) line 2 should have ITS instead of IT'S 2) line 4 (same mistake as line 2) 3) line 7 GROWLS instead of GROWLES

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Simon Whild 02 November 2005

Love it, Liz - i can just see my cat doing this right now :)

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Liz Munro 01 November 2005

i wrote this one for simon after getting his message. I've just discovered personification. This poem will give you a laugh.

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