Monday, April 13, 2009

Tv Guide Comments

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i was a television hosting a cartoon,
on early saturday mornings, to take away your blues,
i was your comedian on those rainy afternoons,
giving you a smile in a soothing room,
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Paige Nielsen 14 April 2009

Okay. Awesome. Straight Up. This is an epic ode to innocence that waxes and wanes, bolstered by your wonderful use of metaphor and repetition. Also, I love the newscaster/disaster rhyme...as one who cannot rhyme, I admire those who can come up with snazzy ones like that. The only thing, was a few grammatical and/or spelling errors that made it slightly hard to follow.

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