Wednesday, May 2, 2018

Tusker Comments

Rating: 5.0

There are many smells of Africa
That I at times recall:
The quay side waft of tainted water
In the harbor pool,
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Neil Stewart McLeod
COMMENTS
Subhas Chandra Chakra 02 July 2018

Congratulations dear Neil for being picked up as members poem of the day. Thanks a lot for your great contribution to our readers who could smell the African fragrance in so delicate a way.10+++. Subhas

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Subhas - shukrea - Thank you. That is a very nice remark. Best wishes, Neil

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 July 2018

CONGRATULATIONS! This Tusker poem is an excellent poem presented with your natural perception about smell of Africa. Smell of wood smoke with low tide sandy frieze motivates mind with wonderful notion. Something really fine you have found here. A brilliant poem is smoothly flowed from your pen. Have a nice day. Wonderful poem is selected as the member poem of the day...10

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Bernard Snyder 02 July 2018

Great poem. One of the best of 2018' in my opinion. Well deserved 'POD'. I've never viisited Africa, but when I do, I will ask for a 'Tusker!

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What a great reply Thank you! I have started reading your poems. Neil

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Anil Kumar Panda 02 July 2018

There are certain specialties, may be dishes, places or people for which a country is known. It is the Tusker beer for Kenya. It is Kenya's premium beer since 1922. Great. You enjoyed your games inhaling its smell. Enjoyed the poem. Then there's a smell for which I hungered Since I was only four, It was the clubhouse tang of Tusker Lager coming through the floor....is very nice. Thanks for sharing such a well crafted and interesting poem. Deserved to be poem of the day. Congrats.

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How nice you all are, Thank you sooo Much

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Edward Kofi Louis 02 July 2018

Africa! ! ! The smell of wood smoke! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Thanks Man! I sure appreciate your comment! Yes that smell takes me back every time!

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Adrian Flett 02 July 2018

Thanks Neil I'll read 'kicked off the bus'. You might like to read my poem 'In Crossways Inn' Kind regards, Adrian.

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Will Do! Neil

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I looked and could not find In Crossways Inn shoot me a link! Neil

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Bipasha D 02 July 2018

Wonderfully written with appropriate rhyme. Your recitation and the background sounds are a great addition too. heartiest congratulations.

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Thank you Bipasha, that is a great comment! and much appreciated! Neil

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Bharati Nayak 02 July 2018

Some memories have their lasting impact.Your poem gives us a glimpse of lifestyle of your country.In our region, drinking is not an accepted life style of general people.Though people drink in clubs, hotels and bars it is hardly consumed inside home, particularly in middle class families.It is a strict no no for children. A well crafted poem along with your fine recitation, thanks for sharing.Congratulations for being selected as the Poet of the Day.

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Harley White 02 July 2018

Evocative poem, incorporating all the senses, wonderfully crafted, along with an excellent recitation complete with ambient sounds... Kudos for your well-deserved poem of the day!

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Hello Harley, those rich childhood memories seem as vivid today as when I first experienced them. I do appreciate your critical appraisal.

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Adrian Flett 02 July 2018

Enjoyed the ballad and a few Tuskers when I was further north

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 02 July 2018

Wonderfully written poem with clear images drawn...congrats for being chosen as POD.10++

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Thank you so much for this great response to my poem!

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Robert Murray Smith 02 July 2018

You should approach the company. Would be great poem for their website. Excellent poem. Rare to get one so well penned in this category. Congratulations.++10

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That is a very good idea, Thank you for suggesting it! and for your generous remarks!

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Mahtab Bangalee 02 July 2018

eat drink and be merry..................

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Indeed! Shukria thank you!

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Kim Barney 02 July 2018

I don't drink beer but I love the poem. Your reading of it really enhances it. I love listening to your voice. Congratulations on having this selected as poem of the day! Also enjoyed your reference to Jacaranda, as they also have Jacaranda in Brazil where I have spent 50 months of my life.

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Thank you Kim for your comment about this poem. I do appreciate it, and I am also very please to have had a chance to be show-cased as poem of the day.

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Dr Antony Theodore 02 May 2018

Tusker, Tusker Lager - The king of Kenya beer... the smell of Beer and from those memories you made a poem which gave us readers a taste of Africa and many informations how life there is... thank u. tony

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Shukria Tony, Thank you for you kind remarks. You probably (well only if you drink) romance over Kingfisher or Taj Mahal beer!

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