Friday, September 14, 2007
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Rating: ★5.0
As soft as early morning dew
and sweet like nectar
surrounded by such subtle hues.
Each petal unique
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David Taylor
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Dee Daffodil
14 September 2007
I love the last two lines David! I crush the dew and nectar and make a bitter wine. Powerfully descriptive poem...nicely done! Hugs, dee
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8/20/2025 7:04:44 PM # 1.0.0
I agree with Ms. Daffodil's comment, but, without the defining content of the rest of the poem the duality being exposed would not be evident. I love the way you lead us on for the entire poem only to twist the message at the last part of the poem. It is a wonderful and complicated message to impart in any form, and you did it with skill and your usual superb style.