Life dwells in mind
And mind dwells in life
Truth lives in time
Time moves in truth
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This is full of wisdom! Each line sounds like a epigram! ! A sure 10
... what a line, life is a relationship so true wishing all the star to see the light, seems easy and fulfilling, you have made the world real and sober in spirit your such a relation to other my friend.Thank you and God bless,
Turning to right we feel Turning to right we see Turning to right we work On pillars of right we stand. Wonderful.
........very nicely penned...and very inspiring ★ Water comes from ocean Ocean carries water
Relationship needs love. To hit the nail right on the head! Nice work. Thanks for sharing.
Mesmerised with opening lines itself: Life dwells in mind, And mind dwells in life..... So is the ending: Turning to right we work, On pillars of right we stand....Well composed poem Sir.
As always a nice poem. Enjoyable and educative due to twists to the right and left in it as also philosophic perceptions. Thanks for sharing. Ten points.
A juxtaposition of life and nature and the coalescence of right
Verily, life is full of twist and turns......10