Friday, March 2, 2012

Turning To The Forever White(Sad) Comments

Rating: 4.5

A single tear falls from the sky.
The clouds shiver and let out a sigh.
The wind they blow turns the falling tears to snow,
As they softly fall around your feet.
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Poet of the River
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Kevin Patrick 02 March 2012

Love the title, and even more the work A single tear falls from the sky GREAT OPENING, the passion in this is great. A sucker for romantic imagery and this delivered splendidly.

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Okoye Charles Chukwudi 02 March 2012

This is gud...but..u never told us who/what u are talking about...u never hint on his/her/its nature...u only leave us guessing....+ trust me this is gud...bt u shud leave us a clue to the subject matter

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Dave Walker 02 March 2012

A really wonderful poem, like it, a great write.

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Poet of the River

Poet of the River

California, but move around a lot.
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