The clock Chimes the hour....... I like that line, and like what you did to this piece of work.... it flows very easy and gives the reader a little mystery and then boom, the story unfolds..... How very good...... A 10! !
Bonnie
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The clock Chimes the hour....... I like that line, and like what you did to this piece of work.... it flows very easy and gives the reader a little mystery and then boom, the story unfolds..... How very good...... A 10! ! Bonnie