Friday, July 4, 2008

Turning The Clock Back Comments

Rating: 5.0

Turning the clock back
minute to hour
I would redo all that i have done
if only you would smile again.
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Ashley burnam
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Bonnie Collins 09 July 2008

The clock Chimes the hour....... I like that line, and like what you did to this piece of work.... it flows very easy and gives the reader a little mystery and then boom, the story unfolds..... How very good...... A 10! ! Bonnie

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