Tuesday, November 10, 2020

Turning Point? Comments

Rating: 5.0

We inherit time honoured myths,
But rarely do we deconstruct them.
We seek asylum from present woes
In some artificial Eden or other.
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Shaun Cronick 13 November 2020

Dominic I believe in that old adage that 'all things come to those who wait' by Lady Currie. All things good and needy and desired by all who truly deserve them. A fine and well written modern poem that is a joy to read from beginning to end. Five worthy shining stars and most deserved for a touch of poetry class. Thanks for sharing and take care my friend.

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Deluke Muwanigwa 10 November 2020

Great poem. You have said a lot of positive things in this poem. We need renewal but the old way based on scripture and religion has brought more problems. I agree the problems seems hard because its simple. If we could just love one another unconditionally we will win. If not we are headed for extinction.

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Dominic M. Windram 16 November 2020

Thanks Shaun and Deluke...I truly appreciate your perceptive comments.

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