Monday, July 11, 2022

Turning Comments

Rating: 5.0

There I stood,
an old brass doorknob in hand;
the moment, still as a dream
frozen.
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Smoky Hoss
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Sandra Feldman 23 August 2022

A fine and far-reaching sensitive piece, appreciated.

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Sandra Feldman 23 August 2022

A melancholic and quite beautiful poem. full of mixed feelings, past and present, Great nostalgia in remembering with love, as your faithful companion.

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M.J. Lemon 23 August 2022

We do seem to think that time always moves forward. But there is something very profound in the idea that it may in fact be a barrier, a locked door keeping our desires at bay. This goes to myfavourites.

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