Turned Inside Out Comments

I love the move from the soft evaporating images of emotion and thought in the first part to the vulnerability of the second: and especially the assonance of that last stanza connecting the sheer clock to what it doesn’t shield…see…reality. Beauitful!

I enjoyed reading this piece about spiritual cleansing, well written thanks, 10 Lynda xx

......... there is no effect without a cause....! ! ! ! ! some eyes are blind.. some blinds can see....

Inside out and upside down, quite a day your having... Andrew 10