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Apoet Bangla (12/28/2009 11: 33: 00 PM) sun-living with my home, I earn. yes, this smart utterance we need every sphere of life today. it proves poetry is the man-made art. reality dominates the emotions but yet its aesthetical height is so tall perhaps touches the mysterious imaginative world of life-beyond. want your more writing so smart and so singular dear poet and remember always 'Sun lives with your Home, You earn'. Apoet Bangla-29/12/09

family must ones best thing to have..... more than the vices....

Sometimes we get carried away by little bit impulsive activities at the expense of some family responsibilities at times, but ultimately get back to our realization and amend the things for the better.The poem is a good reflection of realization and family devotion.Very nice.

wow.... that is all i can say! good poem... thamk you for sharing it with us! ! !

Life adrift I have dwelled, I burn. To a life spring-solaced, I turn. Sun-living with my home, I earn. ---- wonderful flow of poetic words here...just so lovely and full of emotions...Great piece!

after all those stormy experience in life, you realized to turn about, to get back and start all over again and this time it has to be good. Nice and excellent write, I like it.

a package of reality wonders our deep emotion of existence.... a very perfect deeply rooted life experienced..... my heart dismay and my soul wonder..... such turmoil of life ponders every heart to say a sweet goodbye.... oh! my God why have you forsaken me.......thank you my friend...... all have different lapses and encounter of life what we call the fullest of life.... God bless....an excellent poem...a Star and a 10 +++++++++

power packed...indelible in tone! loaded with inpsiration

SELF REALISATION IS PERHAPS THE GREATEST OF ALL HUMAN REALISATIONS, - this seems to be the theme of this poem! 10! -Raj

loveliest write and turning around where the sun shines.............

this is nice..cheers

Good write.........................

Wow... Very good. That's all I have to say. Words cannot describe this poem.

Your way in describing and composing words is very nice and to the point. Your great idea fits to the tittle and the meaning point. Nice poem.

The use of constructive words reminds me of the prodigal son who understood his mistakes and the need to turn to good. Your poem is OK. keep it up

This poem is one of the best I have read in PoemHunter. Your words and techniques give the poem a tone of grief and struggle. The repentence of the speaker is more than motivating. I have seen many neglecting their family and their love due to their submission to drinks and money. They do not hate their family, in fact they love them (just as it is in your poem) . Its just that they don't want to be taken out of material pleasure and that they refuse to be corrected. But, here is a repenting man, a model for others. Loved your choice of words, excellent line structure, use of poetic devices without hearting the poems emotion. Spring-solaced, sun-loving... such invented words give a superb effect. A poem beautiful in its own way. This is in my list of fave poems. Love you for your life-renewing poems.

this poem is the 'Greatest' thanks for letting my read it...10

i enjoyed the poem...thirsting, even desperate, for change

I enjoy this piece a great deal, Obinna! Especially appreciate all the hypenated compound words in each stanza. Thanks for sharing this motivational work! Warm regards, John.

The title sums up the piece any form of looking forward requires looking back eventually all habits could be broken when we look forward since it’s more promising.