Sunday, September 16, 2012

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How beautiful life is
When things are rolling our way
On top of the world
And all is okay
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Lyn Paul
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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 February 2019

You are very true. Life truly very beautiful. Turn after turn we need to feel. It may seem to be very far but you can feel love and tenderness. This poem is truly excellently penned...10

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Hazel Durham 27 December 2015

I love the title and this very thought provoking write, life can change in an instant from good to bad but we must hold onto the sunshine even when it rains!

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Michael Walker 15 October 2015

' We must feel/ that sunshine'. Very important. The image of a pack of cards is also good. M. Walker.

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Maria Gonzalez 27 September 2015

Beautiful poem Lyn. Packed with reality and pregnant with emotions. I enjoyed it very much.

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Words' Knight 24 September 2012

the life is like a boat goes on, day good for you, and day bad for you, this life and we should live it, accepte it no matter what is it. Wonderfull poem like stars in the dark. go on.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 17 September 2012

the life's ups and downs are very hard to handle at that particular moment. When we think about it later, we are shocked to find out that we end up with contented memories! Nice poem!

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Eric Cockrell 16 September 2012

keep walking... just keep walking!

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Valerie Dohren 16 September 2012

Life can indeed be turned upside down in an instant - nice one Lyn.

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