Sunday, August 5, 2018

Turn The Page Comments

Rating: 5.0

Let me turn the page
and close this chapter
there can never be
a happy ever after
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Aqua Flower
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Carl Roussell 09 August 2018

In the process of keeping who you are it is sometimes you need a new start. I really like the theme of this poem; a 10.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 06 August 2018

I can feel your words, Aqua Flower...10+++

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Captain Cur 05 August 2018

The last lined ended strong and passionate feeling incomplete without love. Sometimes we just have to start writing a new chapter, no matter how comfortable that old book was to read.

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Aqua Flower 10 August 2018

Well put captain! I like this comment because it describes very well what the poem is all about.

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