Turn The Light On Comments

The intensity of love of a woman towards her lover and the cheating of lover have been so touchingly inscribed in this poem. Beautiful poem.10

Revive my stopped heartbeat, as I retreat, Let the darkness cease, Turn the light on, No more repeats Of loving a cheat! A wonderful poem...................10

you write through your beautiful eyes and mind with tighten lips... sparkling

Simply, brilliant! You never disappoint.

We all follow our furrows and plough our own fields It up to us to tend them and help them grow even if we don't always succeed. BB : O) What the Hey Don't really care if folk don't like my stuff That my poetry's rubbish off the cuff I'm not out there to be loud, I don't write to please the crowd. And if they like it that's OK But if they don't then what the hey. Yet if I comment on others work And in my duty do not shirk. It would be nice that they learn To pass comment in their turn. Copyright P H Brookes 2012

Silence is a prayer for hope... Like a tilled field fully seeded... Peace is a foreign land that dznt care..... Many great lines n ideas in this lovely poem...

Can I call it a fictional fact? May be. Very nice poem. A heartfelt yearning for a precious one. But in the next moment there is a tone of silence....

A cynic poem better narrated.

I am glad to hear its fictional. Lovely poem full of feelings.

Another great write from your pen Hazel - enjoyed reading.