Wednesday, December 24, 2008

Turn A Blind Eye Comments

Rating: 5.0

The gold in my ring rusts
The tears of a crocodile I trust,
In my dreams, I see the butterfly,
Sitting on my bleeding wrists,
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Reshma Ramesh
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Sadiqullah Khan 26 December 2008

fine poem, , , loved reading it, ,10

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Sathyanarayana M V S 24 December 2008

Spellbinding.........something different from ur poem.Enjoyed reading it...also felt the pain.

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 24 December 2008

An enigmatic confluence of beauty, and woe...then, such is life, when you think about it, yes? ...Pictorial depiction is in feral blossom here, as you virtually place these vivid images within the nucleus of the Reader's mind's-eye. As per usual, very fine work, young lady...very fine, indeed! FjR /*\

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Malini Kadir 24 December 2008

splendid imagery! thought provoking pathos!

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Reshma Ramesh

Reshma Ramesh

Bangalore, India
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