Turbulent Times Comments

Wafula, I like the way this poem ends with a kind of aphorism. Maybe revise as I suggest below: I neither like the smell of this air nor the darkening face of the sky. It will rain soon, very soon! Guard your tongue and trim your arrogance. Anger makes a stupid man ruin his home! If you have time, check out my new website: jeffersoncarterverse.com Tell me how you like it, and, if you do, perhaps share it with interested friends? Thanks. Yrs, JC