Sunday, May 4, 2014

Turbulent Mind Comments

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Turbulent mind
Choosing arms & legs
stems & forks
to be there -
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Karin Holloway
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Colleen Courtney 05 May 2014

Although I like this piece, for some reason it reminds me of playing the game Twister. Must be the whole hand/foot thing! : -)

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Tajudeen Shah 04 May 2014

Its from Rabindranath Tagore, i noticed, for the first time in life, 'origin is the end, end is the origin', from one of his creations named 'Sanyasi or the ascetic'. your verse reminds me of those days when within me had this constant quest for origin, end, meanings and purposes of anything and everything. 'All is indecision for one Decision'.. yea, very much true to the core, rather the abyss of reality still remains virgin. Your versification remains in my arm cup emitting radiance of endless questions and answers. God Bless.

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