Sunday, August 24, 2008

Tunnel Comments

Rating: 5.0

Though I ran through the dark tunnel on and on, I couldn't find a light.
My eyes were straining but I still couldn't see anything bright.
I stumbled and tripped and no one stopped my fall.
I cried out in pain and pleaded, for someone to rescue me from the place.
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Celina Vargas
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Sam Mcclain-d 07 September 2008

Their good, but some are better than others.

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Tom Balch 24 August 2008

What a great piece, really well written regards Tom 10+

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