Time increases the favoured list,
Early morning wears cover mist.
The veil tells about shyness far,
Early dawn says good bye star.
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Wonderfully done! ! liked it very much! 14 Aug 2015 by Candy Barr | Reply picture of Michael Cardinal xExquisitely written... Pure elegance 14 Aug 2015 by Michael Cardinal | Reply picture of Thomas A Robinson xBeautiful! 14 Aug 2015 by Thomas A Robinson | Reply picture of Ramin Ara xWell done, , , Bhargabi, , , , Thank you. 14 Aug 2015 by Ramin Ara | Reply picture of Chris G. Vaillancourt xExtremely heartfelt and well written 14 Aug 2015 by Chris G. Vaillancourt | Reply picture of Angel mia LOVE xWow stunning Bello poema tfs xoxoxo blessings dear xoxoxo ;) 14 Aug 2015 by Angel mia LOVE | Reply picture of Elena S(*_*) x Love and kindness beautifully portrayed, thank you for sharing! 15 Aug 2015 by Elena S(*_*) | Reply picture of Sylvia Frances Chan xGrateful Tune of Morning's Love, most divine. I admire the way you used metaphors of nature. I like the language, the flow and the theme full of divinity. Mesmerizing! 21 Aug 2015 by Sylvia Frances Chan | Reply picture of Prashant Shaurya xAn elegant write and I asmire the way you romance Nature. 21 Aug 2015 by Prashant Shaurya | Reply picture of Jane Taylor Hardy xA beautiful and elegant heartfelt poem. 27 Aug 2015 by Jane Taylor Hardy | Reply Note: These comments are received through poetfreak.
Dear Madam Bhargabi, Namaskar! Feel so honoured to read your beautiful poem. Truly, the morning brings a breath of fresh air, full of love and hope. 10+