Saturday, February 27, 2010

Tune Of Fatality Comments

Rating: 4.0

i dont know anything.
im cold confused and scared.
walking aimlessly through
the dark
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sam naser
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Zack Burton 27 February 2010

Scarily similar to one of the poems I have in my notebook, which uses the lines 'Kiss me, cutie / Kill me, cutie.' Very good. I like the cold, ominous imagery.

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