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mujhe kuchh vi tumhare bin magar achha nhi lagta..... this is the real theme of the poem I suppose. Where there is deep love there is pain in absence. Beautifully crafted. Thanks.

Hi Kavita, I loved this very simple poem of love. It is really wonderful that you have restricted to just four lines, whereas it could easily stretch to one hundred lines. Brevity adds beauty..1000+

jab kuch achcha nahi lagta...to samjho ki kuch kuch hogay...uar...isee ka nam hai piyar.....

pyar to aakhir pyar hai, aur hume sachcha tu hi lagta.............)) : nice poem 10+

Kya baat hai..ye kaisa pyar hai.......Loved it Kavitaji...10+++

boht ache...beautiful