Friday, June 11, 2010
Tumbling World Restored Comments
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A smile,
Which covered my fear,
To let go a tear,
Into my broken world,
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Adeline Foster
11 June 2010
Keep writing, you'll get the hang of it. But remember, a poem should never be forced on rhyme. You're off to a good start. Adeline
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Andrew Bellon
11 June 2010
clear, direct transmission of your thoughts, not yet clairvoyant but getting there, lol.
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7/19/2025 11:52:43 AM # 1.0.0
nicely written. :) . the positioning of the words was impactful.