Tumbling Rain Comments

I think ill take this to my fav. lists too

So please take you poem 'And write it one more time Don’t send it please to her, For she’s now a love of mine.' wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww simply fabulous poem I luv vvvvvvvvvvvit ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! a lovely poem at the right time I should say-- for such things are hapenning here all the time. lll give you a straight tenner anjali

hi woja marvelous...need a gust of fresh air..every once in a while its abeauty charming and succinct....a bit of anose thumb thing for all of us 'Words like empty sandcastles' its a tenner cheers

Sorrow of the heart comes forth well.

Imagery is great here...excellent piece....10+++

This piece brings out a pleasant smile from the reader...nice

well written it shows about the place u stay