Tumbling Comments

A very effective climax 'hoping fervently/ for uninterrupted/ lifesaving /sleep'. That's how I find sleep. The first half of the poem contrasts well with the second. A mess to clean up and imaginative 'windowsills run away/ from the windows'. Leave cleaning up until tomorrow.

Wonderful. It seems you have a lot to offer.+++10

Dear Marissa, such a well written poem...10++++

A good start with a nice poem, Marissa. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

A well conceived and nicely crafted poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Ever So Touchingly Felt! ! ! ! ! Beautiful Heart! ! ! ! ! Thank You Ever So Much For Sharing! ! ! ! ! Definite 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++