Tum Bhi Khush Rehna.. Comments

Dil hazaar sahaare dhoond hi leti hai, Zindagi kissi ke liye nahi rukti haan wo dil ke kissi kone main ik chubhti hui yaad banke reh jaata hai aur kissi ki kavitaon main bas jaata hai. khoobsurat ehsaas Abhilasha. keep writing.10+++

Dil chu jane wali kavita hai....Asar daar aur lajawab....10+++

'Tum mujhe aksar nhi yaad aate Tum mere andar baste ho badi shiddatt se' Sach me badi hi khoobsurat lafz hai Abhilasha.. Bohut hi umda kavita.. Sukhriya.

Tum mujhe aksar nhi yaad aate Tum mere andar baste ho badi shiddatt se.. awesome........

Atyant sundar, bahut khoobsoorat, lajawab.

Tum jahan ho Tum kahan ho Main nhi jaanti Koi pata nhi tumhara mere paas Na kabhi janne ki koshish ki Na kabhi pata krne ki wajah dhundhi Jaanti thi main chot mujhe hi lagegi Marvelous it's like a narration.... Jaisey dil khol diya ho aapna aapni kalam sey chir kar... Aaj bayan ho hi gyi mohabbat, nafrat ko jeet kr.......