Sunday, December 28, 2014

Tum Aate To Comments

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Kutch tum sunte kutch main sunta per aate to,
Keyun mujhse khafa ho baithe ho samjhate to.

In bheegi bheegi aankhon per,
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Akhtar Jawad
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M Asim Nehal 01 August 2016

Wah wah...dil se kahe lafz, jazbaat mein doobe lafz, ek sachchi tamanna lekin ye beech mein aham sab ko rok kar barbaad kar diya...Ek behtareen aur bemisaal nazm...Janab ye 10 se kahin zyada ki haqdaar hai.

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Kavita Singh 10 February 2016

Zulfon se girhein le le kar tum chand ko bandi banate to, Main tare tor ke le aata tum apni mang sajate to..... wah wah lazawab.....

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Khalida Bano Ali 01 January 2015

Ek khoobsoorat nazm........................10

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Ramesh Rai 31 December 2014

Tum ate to kuchh aur hi hota. Rafi sahab ka ek gana jo juban pe nahi aaraha hai. bahut hi sunder hai.

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Salini Nair 30 December 2014

Choti si yeh rat sahi main isko lambi bana deta, In nainon se kajal lekar main is sooraj ko dhundla deta, .........beautiful

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Khalid Saifullah 28 December 2014

Ana ke jhagre mein apne bhi paraye ho jate hayn, ek khoobsoorat nazm.....10

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