Abhi tak jab neend na aati thi,,
maa tu lori gaati thi..
apne pyaar ke aanchal mei,,
thapkiyaan dekr sulaati thi..
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Very nicely penned down.A very well written poem, contains heart-touching words and is full of emotions.Very well written! !
hmmm nice........keep this emotion up in ur poems...........
Awwww so sweet full of emotions.I miss my mom too bcoz am far away from her i miss u maa love u.... And love the poem hatsoff! ! ! ! !
thnx aman bhaiyaa, , hubham bhaiyaa deb bhaiya, , , , , , , ,
I could feel the sorrow of the portrayal here... But let it never be the real one, just imaginary.... Let no child be taht far away from her heaven, The Mother... Do keep writing, with your study...
thanx shahzia ma'am..............for ur compliment...........
... but this is certainly not an imagination for me...it is a killing poem... a powerful mind and a powerful pen you have got from God, Shraddha! ! !
thnx god it is an imagination only. anyatha rula hi diya thaa. keep writing certainly with ur study.
Dear Shraddha it's a very sweet poem your heart is so tenderly flourished with sweet thoughts Thanks