Tucson Bird Comments

Stanza after stanza of well-written lines. My favorite? Made of rapture full of song Rainbow wings to soar aloft To boundless freedom at last 10

By when canyon trips are closed.........when or then? silly me. of course you want when! :) back to the poem, which i'm enjoying so far. hmmm? goldfinch? nest made partly with thistle 'down' perhaps? yes, i'd say the nest size would be a real clue. favorite line so far: Do you trill and thrill the hills? i 'love' the image of lady moon Fumbling with her starry gown! ! ! ! here we only get to watch mister moon pulling up on his suspenders. you, sir, are no more of a 'fool' than i might be. now, you talk of being 'one' with the bird. this reminds me of a poem you wrote about two people discussing God's existence (or non-existence) . if you ever think you have cracked the identity mystery, i'd like to know your decision. bri :) to MyPoemList

Why I ponder how you look When I too am within you One with you and never apart Myself am the bird you are? ......amusing expression. It is a beautiful poem so nicely depicted. Thanks for sharing.....10

Made of rapture full of song Rainbow wings to soar aloft To boundless freedom at last Where time and space stand aghast An amazing poem.....................10