Friday, September 22, 2006

Tubular Comments

Rating: 5.0

Think about this he says;
“Life is tubular”
I chewed and swallowed
and listened to the globular pipe fitter
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George Murdock
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Michael Harmon 19 August 2009

A successful application of an extended metaphor. A very clever and sardonic piece of writing. Nicely done.

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Nimal Dunuhinga 01 April 2009

Really you are a philosopher poet and a well mannered human being that proves in this poem.Good luck my dear George!

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Patti Masterman 10 November 2006

I love this poem; love to think about weird stuff like this (especially when it it true) .Please keep writing; keep growing your poetry. Nobody sees the world through your eyes except thru your words.

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