Think about this he says;
“Life is tubular”
I chewed and swallowed
and listened to the globular pipe fitter
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Really you are a philosopher poet and a well mannered human being that proves in this poem.Good luck my dear George!
I love this poem; love to think about weird stuff like this (especially when it it true) .Please keep writing; keep growing your poetry. Nobody sees the world through your eyes except thru your words.
A successful application of an extended metaphor. A very clever and sardonic piece of writing. Nicely done.