Teardrops exploded onto ink
Like water bombs
A tsunami of emotions
Smudged the lines of heartache
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I keep in mind what your said in your poem, I couldn't imagine that I have arrived in Banda Aceh last two month, and I see smile of the new future behind their dry teardrops of people story. My warm regard, Pras
Great imagery about a very sad person..I write tanka, too....a ten...