Tuesday, September 23, 2008

Tsunami Comments

Rating: 5.0

Far down below the sunlit waves
Stresses accumulate,
And thousands up above shall know
The fickle hand of fate!
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Frank Halliwell
sea
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Ency Bearis 23 September 2008

nice vivid thoughts of tsunami into well written verses..great poem... Ency Bearis

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Tj Becker 23 September 2008

This was an awesome read. Your imagery was outstanding, I felt I was watching the pressure building and the disaster about to hit. Rhyme and flow was perfection. It was an easy read as you were clear and precise. Very good poem

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Indira Babbellapati 23 September 2008

it's nice to read ur poem on tsunami...i too hv one on tsumani if u hv time...it's number is 502... cheer

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Frank Halliwell

Frank Halliwell

Hamilton Canada
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