Far down below the sunlit waves
Stresses accumulate,
And thousands up above shall know
The fickle hand of fate!
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This was an awesome read. Your imagery was outstanding, I felt I was watching the pressure building and the disaster about to hit. Rhyme and flow was perfection. It was an easy read as you were clear and precise. Very good poem
it's nice to read ur poem on tsunami...i too hv one on tsumani if u hv time...it's number is 502... cheer
nice vivid thoughts of tsunami into well written verses..great poem... Ency Bearis