Friday, February 23, 2007

Tsunami Comments

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The ground has slid and the earth had cracked
Destroying all beings under water for resistance was lacked
After all creatures underwater were washed away
Strong and fast waves had swam astray
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Anders Lim
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Kelly Allen Vinal 23 February 2007

Woah, one powerful piece of writing! Well done!

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