Friday, October 2, 2009

Tryst With Winds Comments

Rating: 5.0

i stood still in the southwest balcony
savouring the washed landscape
after a brisk monsoon shower
for sometime when the heat
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indira babbellapati
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Obinna Eruchie 15 October 2009

'i stood still in the southwest balcony / savouring the washed landscape / after a brisk monsoon shower / for sometime when the heat / emnating from my body / made me restive...' tender lines.

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Allemagne Roßmann 09 October 2009

whispering winds sweeping winds uplifting winds.................good enunciation! tenner...

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Ranjit Ravindran 02 October 2009

You blend so well with the elements of nature. Fiery Passion! I wish every passing moment enhances your sensitiveness. '......i was forced abandon the play lest winds and fire conspire ' I liked these lines the most.

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Saadat Tahir 02 October 2009

heya prof wonderful..... naughty... the halmark... and the fluidity too some tender and emotive... obliquity...great job like alwaz.... a student gives the prof ten/ten...lolzz cheers and well done

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indira babbellapati

indira babbellapati

visakhapatnam, india
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