I immerse myself
in the deathliness of the night,
touch her bruised heart,
become one with her grief.
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b'ful......jus luved it........thanx for sharing......u r so talented......lordbless
touch her bruised heart, become one with her grief. - what a touching phrase, shows so much emotion. This was a very dynamic write. I really enjoyed it.
very good imagery...immerse/ ocean- go very well...and touching the bottom immersing...the heart of the anguished night...good, Sarvesh...10
dear sarvesh.....once again, a lovely poem from you.great write. ritty