Sunday, January 18, 2009

Trying To Understand Comments

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Today I noticed something about myself
I noticed i work hard to get everyone's approval
Not only my father's
But my teachers and friends
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Frank Lambert 16 August 2009

Hi Cyrena, I can relate to this verse, I was there once. Then I got older, tried out a few different jobs - that I never much liked. I married and have four fantastic kids. They're all different from each other. Even now, I'm sometimes in the same place. Different, but in a different sort of way. This is a champion verse, you have a sound voice. Keep writing and being different. Frank

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Greenwolfe 1962 20 January 2009

Boy, I can really understand this feeling. Being different. Well expressed and heartfelt. The lament of teenagers. Sometimes, it stays with you. My best to the writer. Well done. GW62

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Keith Hendrickson 18 January 2009

very deep and open. well writen keep up the great work

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