Friday, October 3, 2014

Trying To Realize Where I Am! Comments

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Sitting in an evening quietly alone
Being away from all my busy schedules.
Sitting on the river bank under a banyan tree,
Enjoying, how quietly the river flows down.
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Amitava Sur
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Walterrean Salley 28 October 2014

Life, one of my favorite themes to write on. Full of mystery and intrigue. Your wonderful poem is full on depth and has touched me deeply. All must face this reality.

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Geetha Jayakumar 12 October 2014

Beautiful poem with meaningful advice..... Saying ' Whatever you do in this mortal life, Finally, it will draw an end. Think thrice before what you do, Because, only your good deed will remain.' Very true said...Nothing remains, only our good deeds will be ever remembered by all...Loved the way you presented this poem.

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Savita Tyagi 06 October 2014

Lovely poem. Yes we all have to go one day, so enjoy your leisure time. Enjoy the river, the sunset, the chirping birds and your wonderful hobby of writing poems.

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Savita Tyagi 06 October 2014

Lovely poem. Yes we all have to go one day, so enjoy your leisure time. Enjoy the river, the sunset, the chirping birds and your wonderful hobby of writing poems.

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Akhtar Jawad 04 October 2014

Muthi bandh ke aaye they hath pasare jayenge.10

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Valsa George 04 October 2014

Each sunset reminds us of a life coming to an end and each sunrise reminds us of a new start! The fleeting life on Earth is compensated by a perennial life extending to eternity! So earn more for a life that is to last for ever! Great thoughts Amitava

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 03 October 2014

Quietly flows the river... All thoughts keep changing from time to time. Beautiful message delivered at the end of the poem. Thank you.

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