Trying To Dream Again Comments
A journey through countless hems of lights, for a thousand years have passed........finally awake under the gaze of a sky so bright..., for a strange new world i sought..., Or do you have one last magic spell that can work? For i still have a stack of believe in that fiery shield you wore.....,
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Beautiful work, must vote dis.... Bt den again, try arranging your poems in lines, it makes it.... 'like a poem'. ~TT~
Aye! Snuggled behind the covers i lay, .....trying to dream again., sliding back into slumber, .trying to find that dream again, ..... beautiful..imagery...vivid and one can almost see the rainbow...and so many times we have lay with exactly that cherished fleeting moment...now near now so far.... loved reading yer lines :)
A great pleasure to read this poem. Rich in feelings and images. Keep writing, Alafe
''Sounds like a journey through a surrealistic landscape''.
Sounds like a journey through a surrealistic landscape. Well done, greetz.
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7/21/2025 1:26:43 AM # 1.0.0
nice poem please try and arrange your poem in lines